If you're part of the capitalist matrix read?

I like your speech, but the problem is, is that it is too simplistic, and sounds like you paraphrased a famous anarchist's speech. It sounds like the writing of an 8th or 9th grader, and with a speech of that level, most people will often misunderstand it, or just pass it off as the writings of a crazy person. You need to explain how illegitimate hierarchy is bad, how property and currency is bad, and how religion is bad. You need to explain how capitalism doesn't work, in a little more detail, and explain a system to replace capitalism. You need to explain to people the true nature of capitalism and power. You need to reveal the faults and corruption of the state, workplace, family, and all other hierarchical institutions. You also need to explain how there is only one form of anarchism, and explain why the other forms such as anarcho-capitalism (the worst form in my view, and shouldn't even be considered a form of anarchism) shouldn't be considered anarchism. If you want, I can proof-read the literary work, and give some advice that can help the public understand your views better.